December 24, 2009 - Snow Job Ch 02 Pg 08
Snow Job Ch 02 Pg 08

Snow Job Ch 02 Pg 08

In the script, in panel 3, Roka’s comment is specifically directed at Bennesaud, which also explains the extra beat of panel 4 with the awkward moment of tension. Not entirely sure if that’s really obvious. To me, it kinda looks like Roka is just addressing the group as opposed to Bennesaud in particular. If I weren’t so lazy, I’d do something about it. :)


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  1. Zeus says:

    Yeah, I thought at first the panel was cut off, part of a two page spread where the rest of it would appear on the next page but the dialogue still made sense read as-is. Then I read your explanation.

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