I keep having Bocce in these fight scenes but properly conveying the ferocity of his fighting still feels elusive to me. I know comic art can convey that kind of frenetic action better with overlapping panels and chaotic layouts, but I’ve established a clean gutter and panel layout to the series thus far, and I feel like a drastic change in that look wouldn’t really fit.

It’s still something to work on, but this is one of the rare instances where I think animation or live action would allow the intent to shine in a way that’s much harder to accomplish in more static comic art.