Interestingly, this entire sequence has had very little dialog from the Brimia crew. It’s almost all conversation and exposition from Goshen, Clem, and Keyla. Now that I think about it, that’s precisely why I added Ril’s line to Roka on Page 3 about the operation being pretty smart. I felt that the scene was a whole lot of talking but very little interaction with the crew, either verbally or physically. So I added Ril’s line to remedy that to a very small degree, just to break up Goshen long stretch of dialog. But it’s just enough to work for me and for the scene. I figure Ril’s comment is precisely something he would think and say at that moment, but otherwise, the crew would believably just shut up and listen to the discussion going on around them since they’re finally starting to get some answers.