I had a bit of trouble with panel 4. I needed to convey Roka seeing the police making their way through the crowd, but in doing so, I had a hard time making sure the focus was definitely on the police so that it would be clear that they’re what Roka was seeing. I figured I’d put them right-dead-center in the panel, with a very slight white halo outline around them to help direct readers to them as much as possible.
it worked