Staging this scene was a little difficult in that I wanted Bocce and the two Kaagan-Vas separated from everyone else for their confrontation. In the earlier pages, I wasn’t quite sure how I’d pull that off believably, but I think the previous explosion was big enough, that I can buy some characters getting tossed a bit further than others. I think the tiered drop-down onto a lower level also helps convey the physical separation from the main level of activity in some small way.
Yeah, this is gonna be good!
I have a feeling that with Bocce’s rage and practiced fine manipulation of his arm, those two are in for a word of hurt.
It might just be the magnification, but that his arm seems to have a little more fuzziness to the edges plays well into his emotional state. Like his arm is barely contained.
Llllet’s get ready to RUMBLLLLLLE!
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Not to be spammy, but I wanted to mention a new RPG that is currently being Kickstarted called BULLDOGS! It’s being called “The Han Solo RPG”, and seems totally in the vein of Runners: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1034531507/bulldogs-sci-fi-that-kicks-ass
Runners originally had me reaching the Starblazer Adventures RPG, but Bulldogs looks way, way cooler (and better designed).
You killed my father! Prepare to die!
And he even has the little nicks on his cheek! Now I just need to work Bennesaud into the background to take Andre the Giant’s place.