I think this is one of those moments where it will read a bit better in the printed book. With a week between online pages, it’s pretty easy to look at the last panel of the previous page and figure out it’s Sky’s arm in shiny mode. So the top panel here is less of a reveal. But I think in reading a physical book, you’d probably just turn the page immediately to the reveal.
With Jayd’s line at the end, I’m not sure if it needed clarification. Basically, she’s not good at following orders either as she is no longer doing Tylo’s bidding by letting Sky go. Sometimes it’s hard to figure out if everything is entirely clear, but I also don’t want to go the opposite way and spell things out TOO much.
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