It seemed a little weird to me to have the story end with this voiceover dialogue from Tylo, as opposed to some sort of direct scene with the Brimia crew talking or doing something. There’s no last joke from Cember or “let’s get going” line from Roka or anything like that.

But I really liked the content of Tylo’s voiceover and how it covers everything from Roka’s past mistakes, to hints about the trouble Sky will bring, to an acknowledgment of the crew being a great team, and ending with a nod to all the great adventures to come for them. So I was willing to keep the voiceover as is at the expense of any last sign-off from the crew itself.